Question

Read this excerpt from a research paper:


Curfews have been used effectively in many towns to reduce crime. By having kids return home at a set time, they will also achieve better grades in school. High-schoolers who obey their curfew will make our nation stronger by becoming better leaders. Even President Obama agrees, "Education is the key to this country's future."
Which revision criterion could be used to improve this excerpt?
A. Logic
B. Use of support
C. Word choice
D. Transparency

Answer 1

a logic seem to be the best answer for this hope it helps!!!  :)

Answer 2

The correct answer is B. The claims in this excerpt would be greatly improved if the author provides evidence and examples of his/her claims. For instance, the author mentions that if a curfew is set, students will have better grades at school. Support should be included for this idea as it is not clear how a curfew leads to better academic performance. Logic is somewhat present throughout the paragraph, though the use of support would make the reasoning much more logical