Question

Recall a "first" in life: the birth of your first baby sibling, your first time driving, the first birthday party you remember, or another first. Write two paragraphs that describe this important event, paying particular attention to details and sequencing. Remember that details refer to the facts of observations an author includes or omits. Think of details as specifics. For example, if the author said she drove a Mustang, you wouldn't know much. However, if she said she drove a 1965 candy apple red Mustang convertible with baby soft white seats and polished chrome instruments, you would have a much better idea. Use proper spelling and grammar. (10 points)

Your answer:

Answer 1

The birth of my first child was a beautiful experience and when my child was brought to me the first time she had so much black hair it was in a ponytail on top of her head.

Answer 2

I am choosing my first time ever riding my bike without training wheels. My sister and I were playing near our garage in Wisconsin and I was around the age of 7-8. While we were playing around our garage, she dared me to ride my bike without training wheels. So I did and I got my bike ready and my helmet ready. And I rode down the hill beside the garage and didn't crash or fall off.

After that I felt super accomplished about not falling off my bike for the first time riding it without training wheels. Also, my sister who is two years older than me was super surprised I didn't fall off my bike while I was riding down the hill. Then we went back up the hill and rode back down it a couple more times for fun. Finally, we went back up to the garage and put our bikes back up and went back to our house and ate dinner and went to sleep.