Question

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I have an essay about Komodo Dragons due. In the first paragraph, I need to explain why deer on Komodo island is decreasing and what it causes. In my second paragraph, I need to say how it's affecting the villagers (it's affecting the villagers because the dragons come and eat the townpeople's goats.) In my last body paragraph, I need to explain how the problem can be solved.

Answer 1

Answer:

A year ago I wrote this same type of essay, I'm going to give you pointers.

Explanation:

1: The deer population on Komodo island is decreasing due to poachers. The effect of the decreasing Deer Population means less food for the Dragons

2: The villagers are currently facing problems with the Komodo dragons both of their livestock being attacked and their own children being attacked as well. In fact a villager commented: "Today is a goat, tomorrow is a child".

3: These problems can be easily fixed. The government can help stop poaching on deers. Secondly, a petition for the villagers to allow feeding the Komodo to stop them from going after their livestock and children has been requested. Lastly, a dragon-proof fence has also been requested by the villagers but has been denied by the Nature Conservancy.

Hope this helped!

Answer 2

Ok, so i would do:

    Deer on Komodo island are decreasing because of increased hunting of the deer, komodo dragons hunting them, and decrease in water supplies. This can be a problem because with less deer for the Komodo Dragons to eat, the more the Dragons will eat villagers, goats, and bison. This will cause ecosystem in-balance and economic collapse.

    This will effect the villagers the most because now they will have massive man eating lizards that are hungry roaming around, and they will have to find better ways of protecting themselves and their families. The villagers will then either begin to attack and kill the Komodos or they will be forced out of their village. Neither are good because then one way or another a part of the ecosystem will be lost.

    This could be solved in three ways: One, the deer population could be protected on the island of Komodo, until the deer population can spring back. Or two, a certain amount of deer could be humanly captured and protected, bred, then released again so that you could have a guaranteed amount of population increase. And three, you could put a restriction on the number of deer hunted in a day, week and month along with a size restriction. All of these we've done in the U.S, but non have been done in Komodo.

Hope this helps, all you have to do is come up with an introduction, hook/Thesis statement, Restate the thesis, and 2 to 3 concluding sentences, Enjoy!!

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