As the essay is an argumental one for or against viewing sports figures and celebrities as positive role models. I believed that we can change our lifestyle by watching those role models as some of them set an example for us to follow. So I want to take the side of viewing sports figures and celebrities as positive role models.

I believe that both sports figures and celebrities make a huge impact on the individuals obviously positive impact. By viewing sports figures and celebrities acquire some essential qualities like being hard-working, being disciplined, making use of the leisure time that is keeping yourself busy, taking responsibility, and leadership quality. They make their efforts to pursue their favorite celebrity figure and try to replicate their lifestyle and that is a good sign in developing a good personality.

So I would like to conclude that even the sports figures and celebrities whom we consider our role models had their struggle in their life, no one born as a star, it's the hard work and perseverance that pays off and if people consider them as their positive role models so it's a good sign, they will inspire from their story.

can someone please put this into a rough draft i will put that person as brainly

By viewing sports figures and celebrities acquire some essential qualities like being hard-working, being disciplined, making use of the leisure time that is keeping yourself busy, taking responsibility, and leadership quality. They make their efforts to pursue their favorite celebrity figure and try to replicate their lifestyle and that is a good sign in developing a good personality.

So I would like to conclude that even the sports figures and celebrities whom we consider our role models had their struggle in their life, no one born as a star.

It's the hard work and perseverance that pays off and if people consider them as their positive role models so it's a good sign, they will inspire from their story.

You only have one body and the minimum is 2 usually. I took some of your clonclusio and used it as a second body, its not that much but I think it will do as a rough draft. Now as a Final draft you will need to fix a lot of stuff from grammar, adding more info (including it in that second body paragraph or maybe a third one) make sure your thesis captures the readers attention.

If you need more help pls let me know, I would love to assist.