Question

Music for my mother the question is.. Is this a good summary and if not please write on what I should improve in.

Answer 1

Edgar Allan Poe once said if the bird can’t fly don’t fly. If the old man can’t walk then he won’t walk. If you keep writing very bad music for your mom stop writing

Answer 2

Overall it is a good summary but i would change a few things!

In the second sentence, I would change it to “Throughout the story, you can can see how much the parents and kids help each other”

“Beginning” was spelt wrong

In the last sentence, I would change it to “As the story went on, we saw character development of all characters as they became content with where and who they are.”