Which comment on a peer's research essay most clearly shows empathy?
A. I'm confused about the point you're trying to make in this part of the essay. You're very unclear about the point you're trying to get at.
B. Do your best to learn how to use semicolons before you try to revise this paper.
C. I can tell you put a lot of time into writing this section of your essay, so I'm going to suggest a few areas where you can make it even stronger.
D. I don't think you can possibly earn a passing grade on this essay because it is so disorganized and your spelling is really horrendous.
