Why is the sentence "sickly people cost the company a whole boatload of dough" unacceptable in a business presentation? It is impolite to discuss financial matters in business correspondence. The statement contains a loaded word as well as slang. The sentence is appropriate so long as it is sent through email only. none of theabove
The statement shown includes slang and impolite diction. If a sick person were to read this, they would be deeply offended and would probably tell others that the company is not worth going to and will probably be sued.
