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Some supporters of the death penalty may argue that life without parole is not a harsher sentence than death, simply because of the conditions of the prison system in the United States. Supporters may argue that the prisons in the United States are a “cake walk” when compared to prisons in other parts of the world, such as Russia. Supporters may also argue that the death penalty can serve as a reminder of what the consequences are for people who commit violent crimes. Supporters of capital punishment may argue that life without parole does not constitute much of a punishment because the inmates have a decent life inside of the prison: they get leisure time, three meals a day and they generally do not have to work for anything. Finally, supporters may argue that putting a criminal to death will provide closure to the families of victims whereas a prison sentence does not, because the criminal retains his life while the victim was deprived of life.
