Respuesta :
Not breaking a long paragraph because it deals with only one topic
and
Failing to break written thoughts into enough parapgraphs
and
Failing to break written thoughts into enough parapgraphs
Answer:
Failing to break written thoughts into enough parapgraphs
Explanation:
A paragraph introduces a new topic or a new aspect of the same topic. A topic sentence at or near the beginning of the paragraph often states the controlling idea. All the other sentences in the paragraph should contribute to this idea.