Which is the strongest revision of the following sentence?
Franklin is the type of guy who likes to bike, hiking, and even hang-gliding--anything that sets a person's heart racing.

A) Franklin is the type of guy who likes hiking, biking, and even hang-gliding--anything that sets a person's heart racing.
B)Franklin is the type of guy who likes to bike, hiking, and even hang-gliding--anything that sets a person's heart racing.
C)Franklin is the type of guy who likes biking, to hike, and even hang-gliding--anything that sets a person's heart racing.
D)Hiking, riding a bike, and sometimes getting a hang-glider are the things that set a person's heart racing and that appeal to Franklin.

Respuesta :

The strongest revision of the sentence is letter A.

Franklin is the type of guy who likes hiking, biking, and even hang-gliding--anything that sets a person's heart racing.  

You want all of the verbs to be in the same form, like hiking, biking, and hang-gliding. You could also use all infinitives, such as likes to hike, bike, and hang-glide. You cannot mix the two verb forms together in the same sentence.

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