Here is what I wrote...
The organizational structure of the story "Achieving your Goals" is in order of importance. The structure of the story was important to developing the author's point of view because it tells the reader in which order she though was least important to most important. You can tell that the organizational structure was order of importance because the author used transition words like "first of all, second of all, and most importantly." The theme of this story is to not let anyone tell you that you can't pursue your dreams or reach your goals. For example, when the author said "...it seemed like everyone was telling me what I couldn't do" or when she said "...you should never give up just because someone says you can't accomplish your goal" she meant that if it is your dream, go for it and don't let anyone hold you back.
I haven't submitted the test yet so I don't know what I got yet, but I think this answer is right! Hope this helps!
