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I need someone to check my grammar and punctuation, please.


From all of the careers it listed I would be most interested in a substance abuse and behavioral disorder counselors. Being able to help people with a disorder has always been an interest of mine, it is also the closest career from the ones it listed that would let me study someone's behavior which is the career I am really trying to get into.

The least interesting career would be a marriage and family therapist. I have never had an interest in being apart of someone's relationship issues. Personally, I think that is something that you should work out with you're partner rather than going to a stranger and asking for their help. I know that is the purpose of a marriage therapist but it is just my opinion.

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From all of the careers listed, I would be most interested in a substance abuse and behavioral disorder counselor. Being able to help people who struggle with disorders has always been interest of mine. Also, for a career I really want to study peoples' behavior and the two I listed are most relatable.

In my opinion, a marriage and family therapist is the least interesting career. I have never been interested in being apart of someones relationship issues. I personally think it's a situation where things should be kept personal and resolved between the two. I know that is the purpose of a marriage and family therapist, but this is my personal opinion. 

I know I changed more than just the punctuation, but I think things flowed more smoothly. Nice job!
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