Question

The following sentence has been revised in several ways. Which of the revisions does not improve the awkward or illogical construction? Fustian writing is where you write pompous, bombastic nonsense. Fustian writing is pompous, bombastic nonsense. Pompous, bombastic nonsense is described as Fustian writing. Where you write pompous, bombastic nonsense is Fustian writing.

Answer 1

the answer is most likely b

Answer 2

Answer:

Where you write pompous, bombastic nonsense is Fustian writing.

Explanation:

This phrase is the only one among the options provided that is confusing, without coherence, cohesion or meaning. With this, we can conclude that it is the revision that does not improve the awkward and illogical construction.