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Rewrite this paragraph, correcting any mistakes in italicized plurals or possessives.

Much to Bradfords amazement, Samoset spoke to the Pilgrims in broken English. Samoset convinced his fellow Indians’ to return the settler’s tools. He persuaded Massasoit to pay his respects to the Pilgrims and introduced them to one of his friend’s, Squanto.

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Much to Bradfords astonishment, Samoset addressed the Pilgrims in broken English. Samoset persuaded his kindred Indians' to restore the pioneer's apparatuses. He influenced Massasoit to offer his regards to the Pilgrims and acquainted them with one of his friend's, Squanto.