Question

Read the paragraph. (1) As I absorbed the many emotions surrounding me, I felt a wave of pride wash over me. (2) We had done our best and had valiantly fought until the end, never once doubting or giving up. (3) Our fan support had been phenomenal. (4) Although we had lost, everyone filed out of the bleachers with their heads held high and a good feeling in their hearts. Which revision would best improve the paragraph?

Replace “good” with “warm” in sentence 4.
Add the sentence, “We led most of the game.”
Combine sentence 1 and sentence 2.
Delete sentence 4 from the paragraph.

Answer 1

I would replace good with warm to make the sentence more descriptive

Answer 2

The revision which would best improve the paragraph is (A) Replace “good” with “warm” in sentence 4.

Why should the word good be replaced?

The word 'good' in sentence 4 should be replaced with 'warm'. This is because the word 'good' doesn't fit into the sentence. The speakers had lost and this wasn't a good feeling. 'Warm' fits better in the sentence and makes more sense.

Paragraphs are a piece of writing which tell us about something. They make use of proper language and effective vocabulary.

Hence, the correct answer is Option A.

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