Students in a high school science class were instructed
to write a formal lab report after conducting an
experiment. Read the excerpt from a report, then
choose the clearest, most direct feedback.
O Remove personal pronouns such as I and my for a
more formal tone.
O You chose a few words that make your report's tone
too informal.
* No one wants to read about personal opinions in a
scientific report.
OI disagree with your conclusion here. My strategy
was more effective at adding support.
