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Well, in the book Outliers, Malcolm Gladwell it is the story of success.
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In the book, Outliers, Malcolm Gladwell enunciates numerous stories of success.
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What is the real definition of success, in fact is there even a definition?
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What is the real definition of success, in fact, is there even a definition?
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Some successful people are born with talent, and skills.
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Some successful people are born with talent and skills.
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Such as, Yao Ming. He was the tallest Chinese center to ever play basketball. He was born with that height, and put it into use.
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For example, Yao Ming, the tallest Chinese center to ever play basketball, was born with unique height and put it to use.
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She woke up at 5:30 AM everyday and got back at 5 PM.
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She woke up at 5:30 AM every day and got back at 5 PM.
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There are many more different reasons for Malcolm Gladwell writing this book.
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There are plenty more reasons for Malcolm Gladwell writing this book.
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Well, in the book Outliers, Malcolm Gladwell it is the story of success.
Into:
In the book, Outliers, Malcolm Gladwell enunciates numerous stories of success.
Change: (Comma after fact)
What is the real definition of success, in fact is there even a definition?
Into:
What is the real definition of success, in fact, is there even a definition?
Change: (Negate the comma after talent)
Some successful people are born with talent, and skills.
Into:
Some successful people are born with talent and skills.
Change: (Sentence structure and commas)
Such as, Yao Ming. He was the tallest Chinese center to ever play basketball. He was born with that height, and put it into use.
Into:
For example, Yao Ming, the tallest Chinese center to ever play basketball, was born with unique height and put it to use.
Change: (Word usage)
She woke up at 5:30 AM everyday and got back at 5 PM.
Into:
She woke up at 5:30 AM every day and got back at 5 PM.
Change: (Adjective quantifier misused)
There are many more different reasons for Malcolm Gladwell writing this book.
Into:
There are plenty more reasons for Malcolm Gladwell writing this book.
!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!
These were some of the things I thought needed to be corrected in your essay. If my corrections do not fit in with your essay, or I gave corrections that conflict with other sentences in the paragraph, please feel free to let me know! However, if my corrections are acceptable and allow your essay to flow easier, please consider marking my answer as Brainliest! :)
Hope I could help you out!
( By the way, if you have google chrome, I suggest you install Grammarly. It gives you detailed corrections that will definitely boost your English skills. As a college student, it is the best thing that I have used so far! )
Have a good one.
God bless!