FIND THE 6 ERRORS IN THIS RESUME 30 POINTS!!!!


Joe Graduate
123 First Apartment Ave., Hartford, CT 06114
(555) 555-1234
JoeGraduate@email.com

OBJECTIVE Ambitious and creative recent graduate seeks a challeenging position that requires exceptional righting, editing, comprehension and interpersonal skills.

SUMMARY
Flexible; can addjust quickly to any setting
Excels at tasks requiring communication skills
Adept with complex data platforms
Proficient in Microsoft Word, Excel and PowerPoint

EDUCATION
Great Connecticut State University, New Britain, CT
B.A. in English with minor in journalism (Sept. 2005-May 2009)

EXPERIENCE
Freelance Writer, Hartford Community Newspaper Hartford, CT (August 2009-Present)
Writes multiple daily stories on a variety of topics
Shoots photographs to serve as art for own stories
Coordinates deadlines and task schedules with editors
Participates in weekly productivity meetings

Student TV Station, New Britain, CT Copy Editor (September 2008-June 2009)
Edited all on-air content copy
Brainstormed daily content with staff writers
Managed righting staff before/after daily morning show

First Job Burgers, Wallingford, CT Shift Leader (June 2006-August 2007)
Maintained a clean, orderly and well-stocked restaurant
Provided impppeccable service at front counter and drive-thru
Managed all staff and ensured hi performance and efficiency

VOLUNTEER
American Disease Society Event Volunteer (2004-Present)
Camp Rising Moon Summer Painting Instructor (2004, 2005)

Respuesta :

Answer:
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The following is a list of "6 (six) errors" :
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1)  The "city, state, and zip code" should be listed on a separate line, directly following the street address:
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   → Hartford, CT 06114
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2)  In "Objective" section:  The misspelled:  "challenging" should be changed to "challenging".
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3) In the "Objective" section:  The word:  "righting" should be changed to:
      "writing".
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4)  In the "Summary" section:  The misspelled: "addjust" should be changed to:   "adjust" .
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5)  The misspelled "impppeccable" should be changed to "impeccable".
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6)  Perhaps, "drive-thru" should be changed to: "drive-through" ;  but even more importantly— refer to:
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"Managed all staff and ensured hi performance and efficiency" ;
          → The "hi" should be changed to "high".
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These are some errors.  Glad to be of help!
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