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2 boxes with text. Box, right: Mohandas Gandhi used nonviolent protest to fight British rule in India. He was influenced by several factors, including Christianity, Hinduism, and Thoreau's ideas on civil disobedience (B B C). He called his nonviolent protest satyahraha, or devotion to truth (Britannica). His methods of nonviolent protest included noncooperation with the British. Gandhi also organized boycotts of British-made goods. Box, left: Gandhi used nonviolent protest to fight British rule in India. His form of protest was called satyahraha. His methods included noncooperation and boycotts of British-made goods.
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