Question

Kyle thought that he would go to the job interview, that he would talk about his previous experience, and that the manager’s Kyle thought that he would go to the job interview, that he would talk about his previous experience, and that the manager’s questions would be answered by him.

To correct the error in parallel structure, replace the underlined portion with .questions would be answered by him

Answer 1

that he would answer the mangers question

Answer 2

The correct way to solve the error in parallel structure is the following:

Kyle thought that he would go to the job interview, that he would talk about his previous experience, and that he would answer the manager's questions.

A parallel structure consists of elements that are in the same grammatical form. In this way, the ideas are given the same level of importance. In this paragraph, the structure of the ideas is "that he would...". Thus, the last clause "that the manager's questions would be answered by him" needed to be changed in order to get a parallel structure.