Question

What is the best way to revise these sentences to make them more descriptive? isabel plants flowers. they attract lots of butterflies. they eat the nectar and pollinate the flowers.

Answer 1

This would be my way.
Isabel planted many flowers of both beauty and smell. The flowers were so nice and beautiful, they attracted many butterflies. The butterflies, decided to eat the sweet nectar from these pretty flower. They also pollinated them so they could come back to drink the sweet nectar again.
I'm not feeling very creative right now. But this seems pretty descriptive.

Answer 2

The flowers in isabels garden attract many butterflies. As these colorful butterflies flutter from flower to flower in search of nectar, they pollinate the flowers.