Question

can someone proof read this page about a quote from the love hypothesis??? and give any comments or things i should add to make it better. everything in green i may change or the wording is off

Answer 1

Answer:

comma after tyically; don't use the part in the parenthesis, comma after other hand, adam never silently judged her?

Explanation:

also don't use the word after the paretnthesis, i dont think you know what it means