Question

First, read a draft of an essay, "Two Critiques of Imperialism." This essay was written in response to an assignment asking the writer to examine how Joseph Conrad's Heart of Darkness and Jonathan Swift's Gulliver's Travels use the strengths of their respective genres to critique imperialism. Revise the essay to make it clearer and more persuasive. Try to make the use of rhetorical devices more effective, the tone more consistent, and the transitions more organized. Your assignment should include the following elements: A clear introduction with a persuasive thesis statement Clear, concise supporting reasons that convincingly defend the thesis Well-written commentary to defend your reasons and evidence Appropriate transitions between and within paragraphs A concluding paragraph that recaps main points and makes the essay feel finished At least one trope and one scheme You should have completed a draft of this assignment in the activity before this one. If you haven't done so, go back and complete that activity now.

Answer 1

The prompt you have been given is to revise an essay to make it clearer. Follow the instruction below to make an effective revision.

How do you revise an essay to make it clearer?

Besides the instruction already given in the prompt:

1. pen down the key points are you read through the original text;
2. arrange the paragraphs containing key points in a logical order
3. use transition words to connect paragraphs and sentences to make them more readable. Examples of transition words are:

• Nevertheless
• although
• before
• subsequently etc.

   4. Ensure that your work has an Introduction, a Body, and a Conclusion, then remove all grammatical errors.

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