Question

All artists! Any tips on these drawings?The first one is supposed to be maybe a clown but not sure...

Answer 1

Perhaps think about the 3d structure of the eye - the eyeball is a sphere, and the skin around it (eyelid, undereye) will mold around. In addition, the eyelashes do not just fan out - they too curve forwards.
Your art is very good

Answer 2

Answer:

I love drawing and this is very elegant.

The clown one looks like it supposed to be a female  but it's great.

The second one looks really realistic

Also try adding sparkles and/or shading