Can someone please judge these lyrics that I wrote? I wrote them in an hour and I need suggestions on what to change and edit. Thanks!!
BEAT DROP: original lyrics by Jayda Javier
I’m nothing to the world, they dont care enough to see me
This always happens, this is how it’ll always be
Its like i’m cursed and i’ll be for all of eternity
I’m just a nobody in the music world, you see
I think its time for me to give up the fight
Disappear and avoid facing my problems, right?
I could just run away and find a place to hide
Its not worth livin when you dont have someone on your side
But knowing me, I’ll have to push on, survive, conquer
I’ll just push harder, faster, stronger
Dying now would just seem wrong, for sure
So I guess I’ll have to exist a little longer
I’ll just write another song, for the world, for you
Pour my blood, sweat, and tears into that one, too
And the world won’t appreciate it, it’s true
Because they never really ever do
So I’ll keep writing words
Until my hand starts to hurt
I won’t stop until my music’s heard
Until my name is known to the entire Earth
I will never give up, I will never stop
Not until I reach the top
This is my moment to wreck the shop
It’s my hour to shine, this is my beat drop
