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My family visited Taiwan last year. My favorite part of our vacation was exploring Taroko National Park. The Liwu River is one of the most beautiful I've seen. A beautiful turquoise river through the park. It forms the Taroko Gorge. A canyon lined with marble and limestone along one stretch of the river. The whole park is filled with mountains and amazing views. Someday I hope to return and explore more of the park's many enchanting features. I highly recommend visiting Taroko National Park.
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