I crept quietly toward the lakeshore with my camera. I knew the egret's nest was nearby. Suddenly-snap! Oh, no, I had stepped on a twig! When I looked up, the egret was flying away.
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Which first-person elements did your writing include? Check all that apply.
tells the scene from a personal point of view
includes Larry’s thoughts and feelings
uses the pronoun I
shows only what the narrator is thinking
