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indent your paragraphs, put your claim first and then restate your claim in the end- of your essay, every time you a topic explain it, state the info-where you got it from, give reasoning, evidence, don't add questions but if you must,- add symbols such as ( ) then do so,- it's choppy,- every time u add a different topic or smth put it in a different paragraph,- over all, I think it's good
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