Question

Part C
Review your draft for pacing and sentence variety. Choose one sentence to revise either the pacing or sentence structure. In the space provided, list your original sentence, the revision, and an explanation of why you chose to revise that sentence.

Answer 1

Answer:

i don't get why you needed help when you did it correctly which btw, good job.

Explanation:

Answer 2

ok so i don’t really know what yu mean but if yu really put your mind into it, it will get yu thinking n then yu will answer it