Question

Read this paragraph from a student’s short story: ( Anesu could not believe her eyes. Today was her first day working as a ranger in South Africa's Kruger National Park. A pack of wild dogs crossed the cleaning about 15 meters in front of her jeep. Only about 150 wild dogs lived in the entire park. Anesu counted twelve in the park. She quietly positioned her camera). Revise the story so that it includes at least one relative clause and one adverb clause. Have fun with the clauses you add - its okay to add new details or change the meaning of the story! Explain how each clause you added affects the story. ( Will Mark Brainliest).​

Answer 1

Explanation:

Anesu could not believe her eyes. Today was her first day working as a ranger in South Africa's Kruger National Park. A pack of wild dogs crossed the cleaning about 15 meters in front of her jeep. Only about 150 wild dogs lived in the entire park. Anesu counted twelve in the park. She quietly positioned her camera on her tripod, pulled one of her two rifles up, and aimed it carefully on the largest of the pack. As she waited, Anesu suddenly heard a roar far too hearty to be the gentle call of an infant lion. Her heart suddenly started pounding rapidly, and she waited to see if the roar came again.

The fear gripping her was immense.

Suddenly, one of the dogs turned around, and she saw the large paws of the subfamily of dog subspecies of Africa, the African Tracker Dog.

Answer 2

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