Question

Revise the sentence so that its parts are balanced. Hint match adjectives. To be hired an applicant must be reliable creative and show enthusiasm

Answer 1

To be hired, an applicant must be reliable, creative and  enthusiastic is a balanced sentence, since its adjectives are balanced and comma is in the right place with a full stop to show the sentence has ended.

Balanced sentences help to create  logical statements to improve communication to the reader.

There are many ways to balance sentences of which some are

• the use of commas- This helps to give a long  sentence smoothness and clarity  and helps remove confusion.
• Use of connecting words to separate phrases in a sentence . we use semicolon, some words  like ‘and’, ‘but’, ‘or’, .

Unbalance sentence-To be hired an applicant must be reliable creative and show enthusiasm

Balanced sentence -To be hired, an applicant must be reliable, creative and  enthusiastic.

The first correction  was in the addition of comma , to eliminate confusion and give clarity to it.

The 2nd correction- The first two attributes are adjectives while the last is a verb, so it was changed to an adjective to balance it.

The 3rd correction, Full stop to show the sentence has ended.

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