Question

2nd time. l'll give ya brainliest if you answer lol anyway

can someone make this sentence more like a 7th grader said it or something:

The West has large open areas untouched by people. The land includes large forests, deserts, and mountains. The variety causes wide differences in weather. Hiking and camping are popular. The environment is an important issue. Ranching, lumbering, and mining are important industries. Los Angeles, Seattle, and Denver are major cities

Answer 1

Answer:

Tbh is sounds totally like something a 7th grader would write I don't see a problem.

Explanation:

I mean you could make it more wordy but there wouldn't be a really point.

Answer 2

The west is full of large open area that have not been touched by people. This land consists of large forests, desserts and mountains. There are wide differences in weather because of all the different types of land. This is also a popular hiking and camping location. Environment is a very important issue, ranching, lumbering, and mining are important industries. And lastly Los Angeles, Seattle and Denver and major cities and tourists attractions

Not sure if that is what you mean. Hope I made enough changes lol.