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Leonardo da Vinci did a lot of stuff in his life. He was pretty influential, I guess. I think his biggest accomplishments were as a painter. He took a realistic approach with his painting style. He tried to make things look real by using perspective.
Read the sample paragraph. How could it be improved? Choose three correct answers.
by removing first-person pronouns to create a more formal tone
by removing everyday language like “stuff”
by adding modern-day slang like “awesome”
by adding more emotion, such as “made me feel as if I were there”
by joining short sentences with “and” to create compound sentences
