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In order to meet the demands of the growing elderly population here in Metropolis, the city council must set aside more funding for an old folks' home. It's super uncool to ignore a big part of our community. Which revision best maintains an academic style throughout?
A.In order to meet the demands of the growing elderly population here in Metropolis, the city council must set aside more funding for senior housing. Dissing a totally big part of our community is problematic. B.In order to meet the demands of the growing elderly population here in Metropolis, the city council must set aside more funding for senior housing. It is unfair to ignore a large segment of our community. C. You don't have to be an expert in local politics to realize the Metropolis City Council should set aside more funding for elderly housing. It's super uncool to ignore a totally big part of our community. D. You don't have to be Captain Obvious to realize the Metropolis City Council should set aside more funding for elderly housing. It is unfair to ignore the well-being of a large segment of our community.
