Question

CREATIVE WRITING-100 POINTS-PLZ HELP
1. In the unit, we learned that characterization is a key process when developing layers and
depth for your character and for your piece of writing. Appearance is one way in which we
define characters, but it is important not to make one-dimensional or generic characters. In
three to five sentences, please re-write and expand on the following sentences characterizing
a 30-year old woman. Attempt to be less generic and more engaging.
"Sarah, only 30 years old, had worked as a cashier at the grocery store most of her life. Her
hair was plain brown and she never smiled. She seemed unhappy"

Answer 1

Answer:

Sarah is a thirty year old woman who works at her local grocery store. She had worked there just about her entire life. She has brown hair and doesn't smile very often. She seems to be unhappy.

Explanation:

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