I know this is not homework related but I need some feedback on a song I haven’t halfway finished. Here’s what I have so far:
I know he’s there
Far away, not anywhere
Where does he go
When I don’t know
Far away, he’s everywhere
I’m not sure how to continue the lyrics. In the lyrics, the “I” is referring to me and the “he” is referring to my friend. I want my song to talk about my feelings in my point of view for example, how my sadness turns into anger leading to me and my friend having negative thoughts
