poem/song is it good enough for english class?

when i said bye i expected to never see you again
but i pass by and you are there again
and i can't say hi or greet you so i just take back my extended hand
and i wish that there was something i could say but dam.n

we were best friends and we told eachother everything
we talked everyday and always said goodmorning
we asked how eachother were and held the other when the were mourning
but did you ever answer honestly to how are yah
a three letter word was supposed to suffice
i dare yah to try to get me to sum up my life
and then be pleased when i say 'mhm' it was 'gud'
and as if that didn't hurt you well i ask you to chose
chose who, and when you dont do
well goodbye you. no i get it though
i get it though it must've felt like another cold blow
when you're living in the arctic driving snow
and it must've frostbit
must've dimmed your glow

when i said bye i expected to never see you again
but i pass by and you are there again
and i can't say hi or greet you so i just take back my extended hand
and i wish that there was something i could say but dam.n

now i feel like saying a word would be a curse
you need space it would only make it worse
and i hope you dont read this because i know you dont need this
but its the only way i get things off my chest
and if its poison y'know i cant let it rest
so i hope you can just do your best and i'll do mine too

when i said bye i expected to never see you again
but i pass by and you are there again
and i can't say hi or greet you so i just take back my extended hand
and i wish that there was something i could say but dam.n

dam.n what is there to say everything was laid out so clear

when i said bye i expected to never see you again
but i pass by and you are there again
and i can't say hi or greet you so i just take back my extended hand
and i wish that there was something i could say but dam.n