Question

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The company’s research team traveled to Japan last winter. The group wanted to study ancient techniques for preserving documents. The research team had heard a lot about Osaka silk films. The team members visited many places. They found some good examples of wax-coated scrolls. The scrolls were in a library in Osaka. They did not come across any of those traditional silk films.The team members came back to Chicago. They were disappointed. The research team had nothing to show for their efforts.

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Answer 1

Answer:  Last winter, the company’s research team members visited Japan. They were eager to explore ancient Japanese techniques for preserving documents. After visiting many places, the team found some fine examples of wax-coated scrolls in a library in Osaka. However, they couldn’t find the famous silk films that they wanted to see. Disappointed, they returned to Chicago .