Question

Read the excerpt from a student's argumentative essay.
Students at Glenmore High demand an increase in the number of advanced placement classes. In order to
compete with other college-bound students, we must have access to more rigorous courses. I mean, if we can't
show that we took tough courses, colleges will turn us down.
How can the final sentence best be revised for this argument?
O Tough work is the key to proving to college admissions that we've got what they want.
O We need tougher courses on our transcripts, or else nobody's going to notice us.
Without proof of challenging courses, colleges might disregard our transcripts.
O Challenging courses separate college-bound students from the rest of the pack.

Answer 1

Answer:

Without proof of challenging courses, colleges might disregard our transcripts.

Explanation:

Answer 2

The final sentence can best be revised for this argument as:

Without proof of challenging courses, colleges might disregard our transcripts.

From the given excerpt,

• We see that the last sentence refers to the fact that if they are unable to show that they took tough courses, that colleges will turn them down.
• In other words, the tough courses are challenging courses. Colleges turning them down means that their transcripts will be disregarded.

When revising an argument, we see that argument from a different perspective but at the same time maintaining the information being passed across.

Thus, Option C is the correct answer.

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