Read the sentences from a student's essay about "The
Treasure of Lemon Brown."
What is the best way to revise the last sentence?
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In this story, Lemon Brown make a great impact on
Greg by showing him the value of the bond between
fathers and sons. Greg then appreciates his own father
better, despite his father's shortcomings.
O replace "Greg then with "In conclusion, Greg"
O replace "Greg then" with Therefore, Gregº
o replace "Greg then with Consequently, Greg"
O replace "Greg then with "So, Greg
