Respuesta :
Answer:
B
Explanation:
You would definitely need a dash after California for fluidity, and since "the place where the author grew up" sounds like a sub-description, add a dash after for fluidity.
Answer:
B
Explanation:
Sentence (ORIGINAL): California the place where the author grew up figures prominently in his writing.
Sentence (FIXED): California, the place where the author grew up, figures prominently in his writing.