Question

Carson wrote the following sentences in his research essay for biology, using social English. Rewrite the sentence so that it is in academic English.

I can’t even begin to tell you how totally amazing great white sharks are. But, hey, you might already know

Answer 1

The way I'd change it would be :

'Great White Sharks are quite fascinating creatures if you research the history that goes along with them. Their records are very ancient and they are one of the longest existing species to live on this earth today!'

It's a bit on the scientific side, but I hope I helped even a little.