Question

Correct the error of faulty parallelism in the following sentence.

Marsha's plan was to practice every day for the recital, to work on trouble spots in the music, and arrive at the concert hall early to steady her nerves.

Answer 1

Answer:

Marsha's plan was to practice every day for the recital, work on on trouble spots in the music, and arrive at the concert hall early to steady her nerves.

Explanation:

No need for the "to".

Answer 2

Parallelism is the repetition of words following the same grammatical form. The error of faulty parallelism in the sentence has been corrected thus;

• Marsha's plan was to practice every day for the recital, work on trouble spots in the music, and arrive at the concert hall early to steady her nerves.

In the parallelism used by the speaker in this text, "to" disrupts the grammatical progression of words in the sentence.

The parallels are separated by commas. In the revised form, "to" is removed.

Therefore, the above sentence is a revision of the faulty parallelism in the sentence.

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