Read the introduction to a personal statement.
Ever since the summer we visited the New England seashore, I’ve been drawn to the ocean. I’m amazed by the variety of things that exists under the surface of the waves. I could spend the rest of my days learning about the ocean’s mysterious ways and never come close to learning all its secrets.
What is the best reason for the writer to revise the introduction?
A. to change the point of view
B. to change the tone
C. to add a summary
D. to add a topic
