Question

Is this a good fable


The Fox and The Four Deer

By: Christian Steele

Once upon a time, there were 4 deer. Chase, Starbuck, Hurricane, and, Willow. They were walking when a fox started chasing them. The 4 deer always bragged that they were the swiftest in the land. And today was their chance to show everybody just how fast they were. They were winning the race until they started acting too cocky. The fox was starting to gain speed and catch up to the 4 deer. He ate one of the 4 deer. The other 3 ran faster than before. Now they were in grave danger. And they got away before he could get them. Their mom always told them they should watch what they say. The 3 learned a valuable lesson: don’t lie when you’re not really fast or you may end up losing your life or your siblings’ lives.


THE END!

Answer 1

Answer: It would be a bit better if you change the fox to a wolf. A fox will prey on much smaller animals, and in classic fables, the fox is sly and cunning.

A wolf will prey on deer, and in classic fables, is the predator, and is the symbol or agent that teaches about the danger that comes from not paying attention to common sense. (Like bragging about things that aren't true around someone who knows better.)

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Answer 2

yes this is a good fable