Question

Read the scenario.

Lucy wants to revise a sentence to create sense of urgency.

Which revision uses precise language to achieve the desired effect?


The girls went into the tent.


The girls scurried into the tent.


The girls were going into the tent.


The girls walked into the tent.

Answer 1

The girls scurried into the tent since it’s like they are desperately trying to get away from something or someone therefore seeming quite urgent.

Answer 2

Answer: The girls SCURRIED into the tent.

Explanation: were going doesn't sound proper and neither does walked or went into.