Question

Read the following set of instructions on how to sharpen a pencil. How well written and organized do you think the steps are? How would you revise it?

How to Sharpen a Pencil:
Pick up pencil.
Walk to pencil sharpener.
Next, turn the handle clockwise on the sharpener.
Put the pencil in the sharpener and hold it in place.
Stop turning the handle.
Check to see if pencil is sharp.
If sharp, walk back to your desk.
If not sharp, turn the handle of the sharpener again.

Answer 1

Answer:

1. Ask your teacher can you sharpen your pencil.

2. If she say yes, the get up.

3. Then grab your pencil.

4. Walk to the pencil sharpener.

5. Put your pencil in the hole

6. Stay still until you hear an low noisee

7. Take it out

8 . Then go sit back down.

Explanation: