Answer:
1. Conclusion
2. Yes
Explanation:
1. The weakest part of Ms. Jackson's letter among the introduction, body and conclusion is the "CONCLUSION" because she sounded so informal at the end. She made use of the wrong choices of words making it feel like she was more like the employee and the reader was the one looking for a job (employee). She made the reader to be aware that she won't be available at all times by giving the reader a deadline of when they should communicate back which she clearly stated to be in a week. The conclusion of her resume felt like she was making the calls and not the reader feeling so sure that she will be getting the job.
2. Yes I will hire Ms. Jackson because she showed in the resume that she fits all the job requirement in terms of education, qualification and her abilities with even referees to support her on why she is the best fit for the job.
