Parallelism
Identify each sentence as correct or incorrect. Revise incorrect sentences.
1. Circling above, the hawks scanned the ground for tiny field mice, for baby raccoons near streams, and some chipmunks were running in the wheat field.
2. Red-tailed hawks perch on fence posts along the back road and on electric poles near the city.
3. Doctors are encouraging patients to consume more water and exercising three times a week.
4. The hotel clerk told Snoop Dog to cancel his reservation or he should pay for the room in cash.
5. Her father said he would take the family either to the Grand Canyon or they could see the Painted Desert.
6. A news story on the cable networks today is not so much a news story as it is a questionable manipulation of the truth.
7. Have watching television, using computers, and cell phones negatively impacted our culture?
8. Is cable news today reliable, unbiased, and accurate?
9. Employees must not only wear protective covering but also ID badges should be carried at all times.
10. It is better to show up for work on time than running behind schedule.
