Question

Read the sentence from a sample cover letter.
Because I have four years of experience, have earned
exemplary reviews from previous jobs, and am incredibly
intelligent. I am certain that I will become a high-ranking
manager in no time.
What is the weakness in this sentence?

Answer 1

Answer:

He/She starts with because Instead of sayinng I have four years of exprerience. HE/SHE also says that they are incredibly smart if you are smart you don't have to say it you'll show it

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Answer 2

Answer:it over states the candidate qualification

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